This poem of E. E. Cummings [note: this is how he signed his own name, not e e cummings] now graces the wall of my office [the egoism begins]. It's the first piece of poetry to really grab my attention, touch me, make me appreciate life, and make me wish that I had written it--the desire to compose poetry is not wont for me.
who are you,little i
(five or six years old)
peering from some high
window;at the gold
of november sunset
(and feeling:that if day
has to become night
this is a beautiful way)
This poem touches me on several themes the first one being the one to draw me in:
1. "...if day/has to become night/this is a beautiful way" - is a touching way to describe an unwelcome transition. Related to all clouds having silver linings, I've begun to delve into the ways to find beautiful ways for all dreaded finales.
2. "little i/(five or six years old)" - This conveys the wonder of having a youthful presence in himself, and this presence can recognize the beauty of dusk as sublime.
3. "who are you,little i" - A seeming incredulity that there is this person inside (theme 2) who can have such thoughts and feelings about the world.
4. "little i" - Although typical for Cummings, the first person singlular uncaptilized "i" is further emphasised by the 'little' in 'little i'. This lowers the importance of self in regard to the experience.
5. "i" and november - the nonstandard capitalization of i (theme 4) and november deemphasizes the self and promotes the time and details of the sublime experience (theme 1).
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ReplyDeleteI like your analysis. This happens to be my favorite E. E. Cummings poem.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Rachel. This is a beautiful poem. Another of Cummings' that I love is:
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walk in the evening,a little behind you
then people will say
"Along this road i saw a princess pass
on her way to meet her lover(it was
toward nightfall)with tall and ignorant servants."
thats great but!! in the poem the word "november" is not capitalized !!!! ??? !!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the note. I find some sources where November is capitalized and some sources where november is not capitalized. I wonder what the definitive source is. What did Cummings truly intend? Do you have a definitive source?
ReplyDeleteIt is really really very confusing because the text I teach, has the word (November) capitalized.
DeleteI wonder if can use this forum for a doubt clearance ! I am at a loss to understand why the poet has used a semicolon between the words 'window' and 'at' . Any suggestions please ..
I have a book and November is capitalized
ReplyDeleteNovember would not be capitalized because E.E. Cummings used improper capitalization and punctuation in all of his poems. It was part of his unique style.
ReplyDeletenovember, denotes his childhood days . November is the old one like I .
DeleteIn the text version that I use for university, E.E. Cummings Selected Poems ed. Richard Kennedy, November is not capitalized. I think this is significant because no other letter is capitalized in the poem either, which supports your claim that "this lowers the importance of self in regard to the experience." Cummings is also well known for writing with unusual vocabulary, punctuation, grammar and syntax; to modulate cubist form in poetry.
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for the comments. I edited the post to correct "november" and updated my comments likewise.
ReplyDeletei love e.e.cummings and i like your analysis.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Anonymous on July 17 - do you have a favorite poem by Cummings?
ReplyDeleteWHAT IS THE MOOD OF THIS POEM?
ReplyDeleteI see it as pleasantly, wistfully nostalgic.
ReplyDeleteHi Ed,
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you still check out this entry, but we just did a setting of the poem for piano and soprano voice.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LIyPRcl-W4Q
16:9 format, 480p.
Love to know what you think.
Regards,
Paul Lawrence
Paul - thank you for sharing this beautiful work. Robin's emphasis is in different places than I recite it -- both in my head and to others -- so it adds an appealing new interpretation of it to me.
ReplyDeleteI particularly like the treatment of "of november sunset".
Update: we've done a High Definition version!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DScLMLwl7HU
best,
PL
Hi Ed,
ReplyDeleteThis may be off topic, but I worked with another wonderful soprano on a setting of this cummings' aphoristic wonder, #9 from "73 Poems" (1963):
now is a ship
which captain am
sails out of sleep
steering for dream
High def video version, along the lines of above:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izrTFoWbE1g
Best,
Paul Lawrence
How fortunate, how serendipitous, at 70 to stumble on this page!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on 70 years. I hope that they have been fulfilling. Thank you for leaving the comment, and I'm glad that you enjoy the page. Sincerely, Ed
ReplyDeleteWhat is the meaning of this poem?
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DeleteI like this poem no matter if they say ohh it not proper a poem is a poem
ReplyDeleteI'm just listening to Tin Hat's recent CD ( the rain is a handsome animal, music composed for 17 poems by cummings ), a band i'm in love with. And googling to find the lyrics - as a French music lover, his work isn't so familiar to me - , i found your blog.
ReplyDeleteYou may like to discover their song from this very poem, and the gorgeous (for me ) work from this bunch of great musicians .
salutations et respect
Thank you very much for sharing, Jean-Luc. I have just the occasion for the album!
ReplyDeleteIs there a simile
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ReplyDeleteI've only just become aware of this thread! But I, too, love this poem, feeling much as Ed Essey expressed in his original post. The only thing I would add to his analysis is that I always thought that maybe there was a pun intended in the 'little i' - meaning, not only the small person, but also the eye of the small person that was doing the 'peering' ...
ReplyDeleteHey, great to hear from you. And thanks for the additional insight. Interesting note!
ReplyDeleteHi also suprisied to see comments in 2019 almost 2020
ReplyDeleteI love receiving comments and having discussion. Keep them coming!
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